Monday, September 23, 2013

Explifies Jabberwocky

'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves    
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe; 
All mimsy were the borogoves,    
And the mome raths outgrabe. 

"Beware the Jabberwock, my son    
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun    
The frumious Bandersnatch!" 

He took his vorpal sword in hand;    
Long time the manxome foe he sought— 
So rested he by the Tumtum tree,    
And stood awhile in thought. 

And, as in uffish thought he stood,    
The Jabberwock, with eyes of flame, 
Came whiffling through the tulgey wood,   
And burbled as it came! 

One, two! One, two! And through and through    
The vorpal blade went snicker-snack! 
He left it dead, and with its head    
He went galumphing back. 

"And hast thou slain the Jabberwock?    
Come to my arms, my beamish boy! 
O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!"    
He chortled in his joy. 

'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves    
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe; 
All mimsy were the borogoves,    
And the mome raths outgrabe.









Corey Weber
Prof. Wexler
English 459esm
September 23, 2013
                                                                    Explifies
            Poetry is not always simple forth coming pieces of work that contain all of their meaning in an easy simple format. Poetry is full of different uses of language, analogies, and context creating a different meaning from words, and images. Many poets like to use several different techniques within their poetry to show the range of their emotion and the depths in which poetry can take its reader. One poem that exemplifies this not only uses many of these techniques but also twists the English language to create new words and show the complexity of the language itself is Lewis Carroll’s The Jabberwocky.
            Carroll’s The Jabberwocky is an excellent example of how complicated the English language can be. Carroll creates new words creating a mythical creature and story within this poem. The words are those of Carroll’s own creating and several are two words put together to create a new meaning. “Humpty Dumpty's explication of "Jabberwocky" in Through the Looking Glass equates language with a portmanteau, a large leather suitcase that opens into two separate compartments. Explaining "slithy" as a combination of "lithe" and "slimy," Humpty Dumpty refers to words in the language of travelers' baggage: "You see it's like a portmanteau--there are two meanings packed up into one word" (Goldfarb). With this explanation we can see that there was thought put into the words that Carroll was choosing to use within this poem. The nonsensical words, is something that strikes interest in the readers of this poem. Upon reading the poem, one can see why children would love the poem. Children are the creators of this made up words; everyday they are creating new ones because they sound funny, or they just haven’t figured out how to pronounce certain letters yet. The poem like many of its words also has to different meanings. The first being the more noticeable, is about a boy’s journey into manhood and all that he will face along the way; the second being hidden within in the words themselves, is the exciting journey that is the English language (language in general). “The pleasure of the poem resides not in the two independent experiences of the poem but in their coincidence in a text that "packs" them together” (Goldfarb). This poem is a building block for those just learning the English language and how all of its components work together and those teaching parts of speech to both English and non-English speakers. As well as showing the language is a hurdle that both young men and women will have to face as they come into adulthood. The Jabberwocky is almost a coming of age poem for those who have yet to go through these hurdles in life. This poem seems to almost make more sense to those of a younger age because they have larger imaginations, while adults struggle with it because of the unknown words found within. The poem and its author seem to be almost trying to make this connection, showing that if a child can relax and have fun with the poem, then adults should too. The worry of being correct and having the right answer all the time is not something that one should be looking for in a poem; they should just be enjoying the journey of it.
            The form of the poem is not in that of the a,b,a,b format, in fact it in a format all its own. Although not all of the lines rhyme with another, each stanza is still of have at least two rhyming lines. For example the first stanza is in a,b,c,b format followed by d,e,f,e, in the second, g,h,g,h in the third and so on; thus giving the poem a rhyming feel to it, but not one that feels too much like a limerick or nursery rhyme. The form of the poem helps to convey the message better because it allows the reader to see that there is more going on, you just have to figure out what it is. This poem is a great example of expository writing. It gives a lot of information, and ideas but it us to the reader as to how they use them. “Far from being nonsense, each line is meticulously crafted to give the impression that it is saying something serious. In Alice's own words, "It seems to fill my head with ideas -- only I don't know exactly what they are. This is exactly what a good expository text should do. First, present an idea, which of course will be fuzzy until you take the second step, which is to clearly explain it” (Yaffe). The poem clearly explains what it is that is going on and what is the outcome of it all. The words are just the vehicle in which this story is presented; it is up to the readers to imagine what it is. The form and the description within the poem leads to the development of what is going on. Most readers know how to read and understand the basics of sentence structure, with this one can figure out which words are the nouns, verbs, adjectives, and so on thus arriving at the meaning of the poem.
            In all, the poem is a great teaching tool for those of all ages, it is a fun poem to read, hear, and decipher. With so many words sounding the same and having different meanings within the English language, it is easy to see as to why it has become easier to teach parts of speech using The Jabberwocky instead of traditional methods. “Language form and meaning are related in complex ways.
Meaning is distributed across many aspects of an utterance: its argument structure, its closed-class and open-class forms, and its intonation. However, the contributions to meaning of each of these aspects are highly overlapping. This information redundancy can help listeners recover from communication errors (Wolff, 1991) as well as assist them in learning new elements of the language. The Jabberwocky poem illustrates this idea very nicely. Although it is filled with novel words, readers (even as young as Alice) can still infer some of what is being said. When people hear a novel word, they can induce part of its meaning from information conveyed by other aspects of the whole utterance (Billman)
Using all that has been learned thus far, a person can pick up a copy of The Jabberwocky and see that "Beware the Jabberwocky (noun), my son! / The jaws that bite, the claws that catch! / Beware the Jubjub bird (noun), and shun / The frumious (adjective) Bandersnatch (noun)!" / He took his vorpal (adjective) sword in hand: / Long time the manxome (adjective) foe he sought-- / So rested he by the Tumtum (noun) tree, / And stood awhile in thought. /  And, as in uffish (adverb) thought he stood, / The Jabberwock (noun), with eyes of flame, / Came whiffling (verb) through the tulgey (adjective) wood, / And burbled (verb) as it came! / One, two! One, two! And through and through / The vorpal (adjective) blade went snicker-snack (adverb)! / He left it dead, and with its head / He went galumphing (verb) back, etc. All of the made up words within the poem gain their meaning from the words found around them and how the reader deciphers what the author is trying to say.
            In the end, one should not take poetry too seriously, in doing so one may lose the meaning in a poem that the author had originally intended for it. It takes a team effort between the reader and poem to come up with the core meaning. But it is supposed to be an experience in doing it, not a struggle. Most poems are not written to confuse the reader, so take the time to see what it is that is trying to be said and remember to pay attention to all of the words being used to figure out the poems true meaning.

Works Cited

Billman, Angel Cabrera and Dorrit. "Language-Driven Concept Learning: Deciphering Jabberwocky." Journal of Experimental Psychology; Learning, Memory, and Cognition (1996): 539-555. Web.
Goldfarb, Nancy. "Carroll's Jabberwocky." Explicator (1999). web.

Yaffe, Philip. "http://ubiquity.acm.org.libproxy.csun.edu/article.cfm?id=1386855." May 2008. Ubiquity. Web. 23 september 2013.

Monday, September 9, 2013

Lorde "Bravado"




Within this song we can see that she is struggling to find her voice in the first half of the song. She has always been with drawn and it is not just with her family or few close friends but with everyone. It hasn't been easy for her to put herself out there and say who she is and what she stands for. But she has always been told that she is one to be respected and looked up to. Then when the sttention does fall on her, it is like being burned. It is hard to take and she is unable to control how she feels when she is infront of a crowd.

But the second half of the song talks about how she will find her voice. Her time has come and she will no longer hold back, she will no longer allow others to speak for her. When she is in the light, she will find her boice and rise up above what she has been through and conqure her fears.

Like many who have struggled with the fear of being in front of others, mshe has come to realize the great sense of accomplishment that comes with being in front of a crowd and recieving the applause after a job well done. It is something almost euphoric and many will not feel this in their lives because of their of talking to others or being in front of an audience.

It is something different, something that she has never done beofre, but it is something that she wants to do. Something that is out of the norm for her and all she can do is prepare herself for what is to come and know that she will be on top when she comes out of it.

The rythm and beat of the song is very in tune withn the lyrics itself. It begins slow and kind of shy like the lyrics, but when it comes to her finding her voice, the song becomes up beat. It shows a transition from the beginning shy girl, to the girl who has found her voice. It is just as much a catlyst for the song as the lyrics are.

Monday, September 2, 2013

My name is Corey Weber and I am in my final semester at California State University Northridge. I will be getting my Bachelors degree in English Literature Subject Matter in December.  I am excited to finally be graduating after SEVEN years in college. it has taken me quite a while to get to where I am today and none of it would have been possible without the help and encouragement from my family and friends. They are the ones that have kept me going and i am ever so grateful for them to have stuck by my side and not given up on me. 

After I graduate I am hoping to continue my education by getting my Master's degree in either English or education. With this I am hoping to become an English teacher in High School and my end goal and dream is to become a college professor. i am not sure what it is that has driven me to pursue the idea of becoming a teacher. Everyday i question as to whether or not I am making the right decision, but then when i step foot inside of my classes at CSUN I am reminded as to why. Myself and those around me who want to teach have such enthusiasm for what they are or may do one day. We know that teaching is not a easy job and that it is a thankless one. But we believe that if we can help those in high school, middle school, elementary school, and even college to see that getting an education, working your hardest and not letting anything get in your way is always worth it.

Throughout my college career I have seen technology come into the classroom and get involved in the way professors teach more than ever. Technology has helped in the sense that it makes it easier for professors and teachers alike to present to their classes without having to hand out papers filled with notes to their students. Also it has almost eliminated the need for chalk boards or white boards in certain fields I.e. English. Although this portion of technology has been beneficial to all that are involved in it, but I feel that when it comes to the younger generations, it has become a handicap for them. 


When I have volunteered to correct papers for local high school students, most of them will bring me an electronic copy of their paper. This is inconvenient because i cannot write notes on them like i would a physical copy. Also many of them assume that because it is on a computer that I will just correct their papers for them and they will not have to fix any of their own mistakes. I think we need to teach our students that even though we are progressing into a more technological age, that rereading and correcting their work on physical copies allows them to see their mistakes and how to correct them more clearly. Most of us who write their papers solely on a computer will see that their papers have more mistakes (no matter how many times they are reread and spell checked) than those who print out a copy, review it and correct it from there.